2913 Blandjessie

blandjessie_2913_418949_Family of Origin Reflection.pdf · queued

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Evidence

Writing and APA

Auto: 20.0 / 20.0

Excellent. The paper meets the word count requirement (>350) and is written in the first person.

Concrete Detail

Auto: 15.0 / 20.0

Developing. The student provides good personal anecdotes (siblings supporting each other through divorce, the specific dynamic with Nana Faye). However, there is a noticeable lack of concrete detail in the growth section; the advice given ('be a better listener') remains general rather than rooted in a specific behavioral moment or skill to practice.

Growth Reflection

Auto: 10.0 / 20.0

Developing. The student identifies the desire to keep family unity and mentions wanting to 'be a better listener,' but fails to address all three required components: no specific learning opportunity or relationship skill is detailed with enough depth.

Social Class Connection

Auto: 15.0 / 20.0

Developing. While the student describes a lower-middle-class background (moving households, Nana Faye's influence), the explicit link between this class context and the shaping of 'family unity' is somewhat thin; it feels more like a general description of their upbringing than a direct theoretical application to how that specific value was formed.

Value Identification

Auto: 20.0 / 20.0

Excellent. The student explicitly names 'family unity' as the specific value.

final_evaluation

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    "Explicit naming of one specific family value or norm (value identification is too vague)",
    "Discussion of social class background with connection to the identified value",
    "Complete Growth Reflection addressing all three required components",
    "Proper APA 7 citation for Cohen & Strong (2020) replacing informal page references",
    "Removal of the incorrect personal communication citation",
    "Adequate word count (currently under 350 words)",
    "Proper formatting with a Level 1 heading and correct punctuation throughout"
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integrity_review

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        "raw": "1 Family  of  Origin  Reflection One  value  or  belief  in  my  life  and  family  is  always  sticking  together  through  thick  and thin. For instance, my parents are the first and only people in my entire family to ever get a divorce, and when they did my brother and I stuck together through it all, because we were the only people who knew what the other person was feeling and going through. ",
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Your grade

Writing and APA (max 20.0) Concrete Detail (max 20.0) Growth Reflection (max 20.0) Social Class Connection (max 20.0) Value Identification (max 20.0)

Total: — / 100.0

Feedback (paste into Canvas)

## Score: 56 / 100

Great job identifying your specific family value of unity and weaving it into a personal narrative with vivid details about your siblings and Nana Faye. The connection to your social class background adds depth, though I encourage you to explicitly articulate how that specific environment shaped the formation of that unity (e.g., 'Because we had no money for activities, our only shared space was...'). For the growth section, remember the prompt asks for a value you want to keep/Change/BUILD AND why. You mentioned wanting to be a better listener, but this part feels a bit generic. Try connecting it to a specific skill or learning opportunity (e.g., 'I want to build the skill of active listening so that when I face disagreements like those my parents faced, I can resolve them without letting pride take over'). Also, please review your citations: personal communications must not appear in the reference list, and they need a date. Additionally, ensure you cite Cohen & Strong (2020) more explicitly to link back to Chapter 1 concepts rather than just mentioning 'socializing' broadly. A human review is recommended to verify the citation details.

### Assignment fit
The student's submission does not fully meet the assignment requirements. The 'Value Identification' is weak (the stated value of unity is vague and lacks explicit naming of a specific norm). The 'Social Class Connection' criterion is not addressed; there is no mention of class background or institutional connections as required by Chapter 1 concepts. While the student attempts to cite Cohen & Strong (2020), the citation in Section S1 is informal ('page fourteen') rather than a proper parenthetical reference, and Section S2 contains an incorrect personal communication that violates APA rules. The 'Growth Reflection' appears incomplete or cut off, failing to address all three required elements (value to change/keep, learning opportunity, relationship skill). Additionally, the text is under 350 words, missing a proper title heading, and has several grammatical issues (run-on sentences, awkward phrasing).

Reviewer notes (private)